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#51 Old 5th May 2011 at 7:50 PM
Thank both of you so much! :D

Changes:
- Mouth
- Jaw
- Freckles
- Eyes

The hair looks really good on her, thank you diamondcut. (:
I can't make her skin paler than this and I don't wanna change her skin because this is the only skin that make her nose look right. Something is wrong with her jaw but I don't know how to fix it. :/
Well, I guess I need to work harder on her. Should I bring down her outer corner a bit more? I'm not sure if I should do that or not.
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#52 Old 5th May 2011 at 10:02 PM
Jaw definantly needs to come down a bit, and isn't there a yellow toning skin in that range?? I am sure there is lol - but I could be wrong. She definantly needs a yellow based skin rather then a red.

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#53 Old 8th May 2011 at 5:02 AM
wow she looks really amazing. i dont have much to say in terms of actual changes. just wanted to say id download her but yes i agree with kaylarox, her skintone is a tad off. slightly red based...

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#54 Old 9th May 2011 at 1:51 AM
I think the outer corners of the eyes need to come down a bit, along with the jaw, as mentioned above. I agree about the skintone, too, if it's possible to make it more yellow. Good work!
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Original Poster
#55 Old 12th May 2011 at 2:38 PM
Hello and thank you guys!

Changes:
- Eyes
- Jaw
- Skintone

I'm sorry for the slow updates, but I'm really busy right now.
I think this skintone might be better but it looks pretty dark right now because of the bad lighting. I'm sorry for that. :3
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#56 Old 14th May 2011 at 5:12 PM
The eyes look good to me. Skintone is better, too. It looks like the nose tip/"bulb" is a little large and needs to be turned up a bit. Jaw needs to be a little more square / wide and the square part of the chin less wide. Good work!
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#57 Old 15th May 2011 at 7:37 PM
Thank you so much! You're really helpful!

Changes:

- Jaw
- Chin
- Nose

Please ignore her hairstyle, she has it just because it shows off her face so well.
As you can see I have trouble with her nose. I was playing around with the sliders for hours but I just couldn't make it looks like hers. I guess it needs a bit more work.
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#58 Old 15th May 2011 at 8:05 PM
Maybe try pulling the nostrils up just a little bit. Also I think her upper eyelid should be closed more. She is coming along very nicely!

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#59 Old 16th May 2011 at 4:24 AM
Maybe try turning the nose tip up a little bit and making the chin a little less wide/square - more pointy. She looks great!
Test Subject
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#60 Old 21st May 2011 at 3:13 PM
Thank you guys so much for those nice and helpful comments!


I think I changed her hole face, but I still think that it doesn't looks like her. Her nose looks wrong, eyebrows, maybey her jaw/chin too...
Well, here's the update. :/
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#61 Old 21st May 2011 at 3:45 PM
Her whole eyesection (including eyebrows) should be lower. You have them up pretty high, but lowering them would help I think.
Also her noseshape isn't correct.

You have the nose shaped like the first nose, but it should be more like the second one..



Oh my, I'm so good at drawing.. It doesn't even look like a nose. xD
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#62 Old 21st May 2011 at 3:52 PM
I totally understand what you mean, but it's IMPOSSIBLE! I think I need new eyebrows that are not so, you know, close together.

Edit: You draw noses way much better than I do. xD
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#63 Old 21st May 2011 at 3:59 PM
Haha, I take that as a compliment.
Why is it impossible? Is the slider already at the highest/lowest point?

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#64 Old 21st May 2011 at 4:10 PM Last edited by awiiin : 21st May 2011 at 6:29 PM.
First of all I can't bring down her eyebrows because the slider is already at the lowest point.
And second... Well, I continue to work on her. xP
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#65 Old 21st May 2011 at 6:16 PM
Thank you! It wasn't impossible at all. xD
I think she looks much better now.
What do you guys think?

Changes:

- Eyebrows
- Nose
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#66 Old 21st May 2011 at 6:42 PM
Way better!

I want to say a thing about her eyes. Hayley's eyes seems stretched out a bit more than yours. Maybe you should make them a bit more longer in the length (?)
<-----> This way.

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Original Poster
#67 Old 21st May 2011 at 10:30 PM
Thank you! Your comments help me a lot! (:

Changes:
- Eyes
- Nose

I had to tweak her nose a bit because it looked very ugly on the sides, if you know what I mean. I'll try to find a solution to it.
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#68 Old 21st May 2011 at 10:55 PM
If you can move the nostrils up, it would help, but the nose looks much better. The outer corners of her eyes need to come down more. The model's eyes are more horizontal. Good job!
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#69 Old 22nd May 2011 at 12:32 AM
She looks very good, great work! But I think you should change the skin, because this one (on the last pic) makes her look tired, those dark eye bags don't blend with the eyes good. Maybe European Skin by Lemonleaf would help?

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#70 Old 22nd May 2011 at 10:46 AM
Thank you guys! But I actually don't know what I think about the new skin... I let you decide.

Changes:
- Nose
- Eyes
- Skin
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#71 Old 22nd May 2011 at 11:10 PM
She looks better to me now, the yellowish skin tone suits better with her hair. The only thing that I'm not sure about is her nose. But I like her and I think she's ready for upload now

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#72 Old 25th May 2011 at 4:58 AM
I like the new skin much better! For the nose, decrease the nasal bridge width, increase the nose tip mass a little and, maybe, turn the nose tip up a little. The eyes and mouth look very close to me. Good work!
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#73 Old 25th May 2011 at 10:05 PM Last edited by awiiin : 25th May 2011 at 10:44 PM.
Thank you guys! I like the skin but I'm not sure about the nose and I think I have some problems with her jaw. :/

Changes:
- Nose

Edit: I think I have a plan B if this skin isn't work. This looks great too, or what you think?
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#74 Old 26th May 2011 at 2:28 AM
Can you post a pic with this new skin? Then it will be easier to judge

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#75 Old 26th May 2011 at 2:43 AM
I'd certainly be willing to see the other skin for comparison. For this skin, widen the nostrils a tiny bit, bring the jaw down and, maybe, widen it a little more. Great job!
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